Review Detail of SiR_Maina in God´s Eyes
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I had to come back and review this again. I dropped it at first since the beginning is cringe and author says mc is young and naive. I decided to keep reading since I like the concept and want it to be good. I'm not +355 chapters in and my thoughts have changed but not much The writing quality gets better the more you read. Still errors here and there but you can tell the progression. The story still moves really slow in my opinion. Author says he's supposed to be young and naive and will grow through the story but either this will be an absurdly long novel or there will be a major time skip I haven't gotten to. A lot of the time his nativity comes across as stupidity instead in my opinion. Esp after multiple tradegies and supposed growth he's still as "naive" as the beginning of the story (but the plot armor is strong in this one). Still a lot of cringe moments that make it a frustrating story to read. With that said I will probably keep reading or come back to it at some point bc the concepts in the story show the author's imagination and I like the story, just the execution bugs me..a lot. But I think there's a lot of potential. Some people don't mind the things that bother me so I encourage you to try reading.
God´s Eyes
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Tbh, it never really gets to be great but the novel does get better as it goes. But again, tbh, pretty much the first couple hundred chapters were utter trash and very little to no proper character development. I guess it gets better later on, but barely. None of the characters are even around long enough to matter. I still think mc is an idiot too but just not outrageously like the beginning. I, myself, dropped it again after like another hundred chapters. I'm sure the author is VERY amature and it shows too much for me to spend coins on right now. I might come back to it later but my reading list is currently stacked so I'm good 📚
WOLFY:Dude seriously is there even little character development ,I have read lot of books but this books character development is trash below trash
Yeah author is so childish he deleted my reviews when I scold him for being immature and complaining to all readers who says his characters development is way too slow he keeps on saying that character development mustn't be in a single chapter but he forgots about story's timeline and time skips he make. If u have been betrayed to be sold as slave and made to hide and ur hiding for more than 3 months won't you develop and have a tendency not to say your secrets to others? Nope the mc goes on say some important info to his 'may be' enmey and her second son about his special conditions (the plot armour works here so well that every mistake MC makes will be nullified by the author in next couple of chapters) I want him to change that and make a stable developing MC but he says he so 'REALISTIC' and he even deleted my review( I did use some harsh words 😅) I'm trying my best(I'm doing All of this because of my love for the Novels world building and development) so he can change the regressive pase of the Novel which may cause to more less readers but he cannot take criticism and change.
SiR_Maina:Tbh, it never really gets to be great but the novel does get better as it goes. But again, tbh, pretty much the first couple hundred chapters were utter trash and very little to no proper character development. I guess it gets better later on, but barely. None of the characters are even around long enough to matter. I still think mc is an idiot too but just not outrageously like the beginning. I, myself, dropped it again after like another hundred chapters. I'm sure the author is VERY amature and it shows too much for me to spend coins on right now. I might come back to it later but my reading list is currently stacked so I'm good 📚
Trust me, I feel you. Its really annoying sometimes but I give them the right as the author to write as he/she pleases but I reserve my right as the reader to read something else. Especially since reading isn't free I don't think it should take a hundreds of chapters for the story to get good but that's just imo. I would change oh so much about this to make it flow better since I really like the concept too and I think it has more potential than what I've read so far but my view probably contrasts with the author 🤷🏿♂️ Its been getting better as it goes but just not enough for me to stay engaged at the moment is all
WOLFY:Yeah author is so childish he deleted my reviews when I scold him for being immature and complaining to all readers who says his characters development is way too slow he keeps on saying that character development mustn't be in a single chapter but he forgots about story's timeline and time skips he make. If u have been betrayed to be sold as slave and made to hide and ur hiding for more than 3 months won't you develop and have a tendency not to say your secrets to others? Nope the mc goes on say some important info to his 'may be' enmey and her second son about his special conditions (the plot armour works here so well that every mistake MC makes will be nullified by the author in next couple of chapters) I want him to change that and make a stable developing MC but he says he so 'REALISTIC' and he even deleted my review( I did use some harsh words 😅) I'm trying my best(I'm doing All of this because of my love for the Novels world building and development) so he can change the regressive pase of the Novel which may cause to more less readers but he cannot take criticism and change.