Review Detail of Lovidicus in God´s Eyes
Review detail
Writing: The writing is good atleast for someone like me whose first language isn't English. Story : The story is a literal carbon copy of Easter novels and almost all the clichés such as a social hierarchy system, if you don't go to a sect (or school in this shit) you can't do anything, and the annoying "martial arts" is everything (which is utter bullshit. Watch a MMA match and you will see why.) The author basically gave some western names and wester terms (like exchanging qi to mana). Overall if you had atleast read 2 or more Chinese novel (or even some manhuas) it's basically that. The MC is also doesn't have any pride and very naive, that itself isn't bad but it contradicts his personality that was established in the beginning chapters. World background: It doesn't make sense the author himself states that mana is an energy which is seemingly infinite and they also live in a highly technologically advanced world and the problem being monsters invading their planet they should have enough advancement to live their planet or even their soloar system but nope nothing like that happens. The author: I don't like to bad mouth authors for the work they do but this one's special I tell ya, this man asks for power stones in almost every chapter. Sorry it was a long one.
God´s Eyes
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Ya sorry mate. Maybe I was a little too harsh on your novel (still hate eastern genre though). And you are right I didn't read past chapter 50 it's that the app (webnovel) was recommending your novel to me like crazy to the point of being annoying so I thought maybe they did that because my taste in novels. Usually I immediately do a u turn when I see "cultivation" but I didn't see it in the tags so I thought maybe I will like it, but after reading it I was a little mad that it had cultivation. But still that was stupid reason you're just one man and I know it's hard to think of something completely new. Again sorry dude.
HideousGrain:Your review was automatically deleted from the website, and I couldn't see it until now. Thanks for your review, and you are mainly right about how you describe the story, at least some basic points. It's a little bit based on Eastern novels, but I doubt that they use affinities/soulbonds and so on like this. Furthermore, my story has many other differences to eastern novels. At most the points about humans absorbing mana and cultivating is the same while there are also martial arts techniques. However, you don't seem to have understood the point abotu those techniques. In MMA fights you can't circulate mana in a specific way through your body to unleash your bodies fullest potential (which gives the increasement in strenght/endurance/speed or so on) About the world background...I want to see how you write about how humanity is able to fight against beasts and races that are several times stronger, preventing mankind from advancing up to a certain degree. I can tell that you didn't read further than 170 chapters (prolly less) but there are a few things that prevent mankind from advancing further, which is implemented later! A hierarchy system is not really something eastern and definitely something many countries would prefer to using democracy which they are forced to do because of their citizens power (which they don't have in my novel if they're not prodigies with a high mana aptitude!)
Your review was automatically deleted from the website, and I couldn't see it until now. Thanks for your review, and you are mainly right about how you describe the story, at least some basic points. It's a little bit based on Eastern novels, but I doubt that they use affinities/soulbonds and so on like this. Furthermore, my story has many other differences to eastern novels. At most the points about humans absorbing mana and cultivating is the same while there are also martial arts techniques. However, you don't seem to have understood the point abotu those techniques. In MMA fights you can't circulate mana in a specific way through your body to unleash your bodies fullest potential (which gives the increasement in strenght/endurance/speed or so on) About the world background...I want to see how you write about how humanity is able to fight against beasts and races that are several times stronger, preventing mankind from advancing up to a certain degree. I can tell that you didn't read further than 170 chapters (prolly less) but there are a few things that prevent mankind from advancing further, which is implemented later! A hierarchy system is not really something eastern and definitely something many countries would prefer to using democracy which they are forced to do because of their citizens power (which they don't have in my novel if they're not prodigies with a high mana aptitude!)
Ive had that happen multiple times. Where my reviews get deleted, and they are always my reviews that are more critique than complement. Honestly, I don’t think you were harsh. This novel has/had lots of potential that was wasted. The author really needs an editor, considering im only on about chapter 130 I hope it gets better. Just reread what Was written or send it to a native english speaker. All the problems are not something that requires a technical writer. Theyre very obvious errors. Also some of his numbers dont make much sense and he has contradicted himself. Lots of his technical points about the system he created are also very unclear.
Lovidicus:Ya sorry mate. Maybe I was a little too harsh on your novel (still hate eastern genre though). And you are right I didn't read past chapter 50 it's that the app (webnovel) was recommending your novel to me like crazy to the point of being annoying so I thought maybe they did that because my taste in novels. Usually I immediately do a u turn when I see "cultivation" but I didn't see it in the tags so I thought maybe I will like it, but after reading it I was a little mad that it had cultivation. But still that was stupid reason you're just one man and I know it's hard to think of something completely new. Again sorry dude.