Review Detail of lordseven in God´s Eyes

overall, it's a good story with many redeeming points that others focused on (thus my rating of above 4). There is one thing though that I hope the author can work on improving, and that is the pace of the story! the main character is op in every aspect (cultivation speed at least 3x of others, talent, op mana control/absorption, resources, teachers ...) except his abysimal starting point, yet by chapter 200 he still didn't reach the starting point of his friend who was in a backwater island. how you may ask ? it's because of the horrible pace. in 200 chapters there are less than 200 days elapsed in story time! in order to keep the mc as the underdog (since the mc will exceed most his local peers in months) author decided to cram many events in a short timeline which in my opinion is a horrible decision. the story had/has a lot of potential, there is the survival within man kind, the exploration of other continents taken by other races, the exploration of the rifts, exploration of other planets .... yet by chapter 200 we are still at starting point with mc barely at begining of the 2nd realm. (please note human race has at least 6~7 realms and they are a weak/young race in the setting of the story. His friend was a this realm by the time of the awakening...) I have seen many stories that get abandoned by authors or get dropped by too many readers because author keeps the story in early game which makes it boring. I wish new authors would target stories to be finished by few hundred chapters instead of thousands. so author if you read this, please pick up the pace. we don't need every day of the main character to be a chapter and certainly not dragging early realms over hundred of chapters otherwise you will either lose your motivation/inspiration or your readers (which ever comes first). also there is no need to make it repetitive, too much of any trope kills a story. you wrote several arcs of mc being underdog, you can spice it up by adding arcs where he explores (no pressure against intelligent peers) arcs where he dominates, arcs where he keeps low profile and hides his assets, arcs where he hides and is hunted, arcs where he focuses on side jobs, romance.... choices are countless ps: this is not to undermine the story, its merely my opinion in what could have made this a master piece. peace