Review Detail of HideousGrain in God´s Eyes
Review detail
This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it. Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3 The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not. 1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that] It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple. I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that. If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey. 2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional… Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right? Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured. 3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot. 4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger. 5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic. 6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting. I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3 Thanks for reading the review <3
God´s Eyes
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The Glossary will update 'soon', but tbh I thought that the rankings were quite simple....maybe I have to create a discord server in order to explain everything easier ...
Paradoxicalguy:it's a little slow and the rankings are confusing
Is the mc gay, straight, bi, pans or does he not know or maybe hes undecided or does he prefers not to be labeled
HideousGrain:The Glossary will update 'soon', but tbh I thought that the rankings were quite simple....maybe I have to create a discord server in order to explain everything easier ...
NaiNao:Is the mc gay, straight, bi, pans or does he not know or maybe hes undecided or does he prefers not to be labeled
Hm. I feel the need to mention that all functioning universes that can sustain lifeforms require a standard set of universal laws. Order. A system by which the worlds are governed. This goes especially for stories, which tend to be far more linear in progression than reality. High-fantasy worlds are no exception. Even fanatasy worlds have governing universal bodies, laws such as the laws of mana (elementalism, mana transference, mana technologies, etc.) often acting in conjuction with our reality’s physics. Sometimes, fantasy worlds would even have their own laws and attributes. I feel that the later chapters of the novel ‘Soul of Negary’ sums the idea up quite well. In my opinion, the different environments of fantasy worlds are hardly an excuse for inconsistent writing. Of course, I haven’t read this work, nor do I intend to after reading about the possibility of romance, so this comment isn’t directed towards the author (at least not intentionally).
@HideousGrain - wholesome self-reflection. I wish you the very best in your journey of growth while entertaining a bunch of freeloaders like us :p I should be honest and tell you that I considered reading your novel based on this review you gave yourself and I get you on some parts of it as I did some while back. Thank you for sharing your world with us mate and I hope to see you advance and create more for a long while :)
The comment I replied to was him answering the question is there romance. I was asking if it’s a haram and whether or not he’ll have 1 or more wife’s
O5_1:Did you even read the Comment that you replied to?
