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99% useless words. The story has so many redundant sentences that you wouldn't believe that it's possible. The the author has put more effort into fluffing up every single line into 3 whole paragraphs, than he has put into developing the story. If I'm being honest you could skip 3 paragraphs after every line and still follow the story without losing any information. Now, as you can see, the above paragraph could have ended with the first 3 words. I wanted to give you a taste of what you would be getting into & ended up birthing the abomination that you see above. Yes this is how the entire story is going to be. It's a decent story, all you have to do to enjoy reading it is.. trust your gut and only read 3-4 randdom paragraphs in every chapter. Trust me you will be able to follow that story and this way you won't end up dropping it out of frustration.

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