Review Detail of haakuman in Metal Evolution
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The concept is good. My problem is that the Mc doesn’t have the brains to think and plan ahead. Whenever something happens he’s always put in to a passive state where he’s forced to react instead of taking the initiative. I’m fine with this happening once or twice but it seems like this is the case for every major thing that’s happened so far. Speaking of major events - literally every single thing that’s happened so far is him being inexplicably dragged into an accident. It’s like there’s always some invisible force that makes sure everything has to go wrong for him. Again, im fine with this happening once or twice but for this to happen like every other chapter? This just makes it unrealistic. Anyways, this novel had potential but is ultimately ruined by a stupid Mc and forced plot.
Metal Evolution
Drifting Black Cat
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Late to reply but this is basically the modus operandi of most webnovel authors. Make up interesting but powerful power/cheat for the MC. Proceed to fail to think about the repercussions of said power/cheat in the novel. Have the power/cheat undeveloped because it is already too op and if it was properly developed the novel would become pointless. Or because the author realizes too late that the power/cheat is too powerfull and be too lazy to write a proper power/cheat and give the MC increasingly higher difficulty and unluckier events. The problem this creates is that you get addicted to the adrenaline rush and the author must find some source of higher quantity and quality of adrenaline rush. This spirals out of control quite fast.