Review Detail of OneShadow in Heavenly Dao Formula

I really don't like making reviews so i will keep this short. This book from what I struggled through so far is a needless expose on common sense and normal logic overexplained and overpraised to pad the word count the writing comes off quite awkward at times the characters don't seem like anything special the world seems like it has a bit of potential but the poor writing or translation brings me out of it the author treats their readers like they are a five year old child that has been living in a cave their whole life i was honestly quite bored reading this I rarely ever review anything but i really just disliked it to some people it might be enjoyable but to me i couldn't even finish the trial read which never happens i just could not get any enjoyment out of this which sucks because i love settings where the supernatural coincides with the mundane i will give some props to the author on the spell casting aspect it is not a new approach but it is fairly uncommon which is a nice thing to see the world could turn out to be to be fairly interesting further in well if anyone read this and agreed with some of things i said tell me down below whether it is worth it or not to read the rest if it is i will give it another shot and rerate this then if i actually find it enjoyable in the end well this did not end up short at all and i am to lazy to edit this so tldr well too much effort to delete this i will just go with it