Review Detail of Korriberg in Cold Blooded Princess

Sounds interesting and kinda hooked me, not enough though to gloss over the grammatical mistakes. I'll probably be back once the story has been proofread. A grammar check would really help. besides that it sounds pretty interesting. I'm just a stickler for spelling/grammatical correctness in the stuff I read. Even if my own English is flawed, not my first language. Should the grammar improve dramatically in the later chapters, please let me know so I can continue reading!