Review Detail of ssfx3yuchens in A DESIGNED LOVE

This is a honest review by SSFX3YUCHENS, with a message to the author. Firstly, the story is relaxing and easy to read. On the other hand, I noticed a few grammatical errors. I wish to inform the author that I see a lot of potential in your story nevertheless. I understand as a fellow writer, we are all prone to grammar and vocabulary errors; I myself am no exception. My suggestion is moving forward, it would be most beneficial if you could identify such errors and correct them as you go along. I will provide you further info in DM. I hope these suggestions are helpful to you in your writing journey as I tend to make such mistakes myself and would like to share more with you. I like the idea behind the story and am a great isekai fan myself. I have also added the story to my library and will read it when I have time. All the best, SSFX3YUCHENS.