Review Detail of Dugzaw in kasumi

Pros: I am intrigued by the synopsis of the story. The fact that you have the name of the protagonist as the title is interesting. I wonder why we Kasumi was chosen as the title and not Ex. I can tell you focused your time to these characters as the dialogue is believable. Cons: Just some minor grammar and tense changes in synopsis, first chapter. The beginning scene of the alarm clock beeping is a bit cliche, oftentimes starting a story with an onomatopoeia is not the strongest intro. I wish more chapters were not paywalled! Great work altogether! I hope you enjoy the Review. let me know if you need any other reviews!