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PlotArmorSama
PlotArmorSamaLv33yrPlotArmorSama

Story and background are nice and all, but the MC is dumb and pussy as hell. One time he removes some 'Unwanted bugs' from existence and threatens 'them' and another moment he's calling the 'bug' with sama honorific when clearly he's the one who has the bugs life in his palm... It killed all mood to read further into the story. The author didn't find any other plot so he's going with the DarlingFX soldier taking orders from lower beings route...

Heir Of The Void In An Anime World~

Alferian

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Alferian
AlferianAuthorAlferian

My dear reader... Seriously dude? You won't add honorifics to his name just because he is lower than him in the hierarchy Well, if it was me, even if it was a beggar, I would still address him with proper honorifics if he was elder than me~ Not complaining though about your review~ And thanks for the review anyway^^

PlotArmorSama
PlotArmorSamaLv3PlotArmorSama

it's not about honorifics, it's about the fact that he literally had and has his life in MCs pa yet he lowers himself, shackles himself as his 'pawn'. why would he agree to be a war soilder when he is afraid to 'harm' a part of him or he claims of the living beings. now don't give me bullshit it's humanities enemies, and all that. We all know that MC was the only living being, if you can count him one, that was around. so humanities enemies exists means they are also part of him. so why in the right mind would he agree?

Alferian:My dear reader... Seriously dude? You won't add honorifics to his name just because he is lower than him in the hierarchy Well, if it was me, even if it was a beggar, I would still address him with proper honorifics if he was elder than me~ Not complaining though about your review~ And thanks for the review anyway^^
Alferian
AlferianAuthorAlferian

So see it like this..... There is humanity on one hand which accounts for 30% evil okay? Then there are the Klaxosaurs on the other hand who account for 70% evil okay? So who will he want to destroy? The klaxosaurs? Nah that would kill off the balance as they account for 70% of the evil So why is he killing the klaxosaurs? It's because the Klaxosaurs are organic weapons and not living beings~ as the Klaxosapiens who were inside the klaxosaurs are long dead and are just mutated source of kinda organ for the klaxosaur So yeah they are already dead but their souls are trapped inside the klaxosaur and so after Izayoi weighed the pro's and con's he decided to help humanity Not that he was just impulsive and became his pawn And as for him becoming a pawn, well wait for the next two chapters~ Thank you~

PlotArmorSama:it's not about honorifics, it's about the fact that he literally had and has his life in MCs pa yet he lowers himself, shackles himself as his 'pawn'. why would he agree to be a war soilder when he is afraid to 'harm' a part of him or he claims of the living beings. now don't give me bullshit it's humanities enemies, and all that. We all know that MC was the only living being, if you can count him one, that was around. so humanities enemies exists means they are also part of him. so why in the right mind would he agree?
PlotArmorSama
PlotArmorSamaLv3PlotArmorSama

ohh all right then. will be looking forward to how the story progresses, and please give some subtle hints to the readers that MC is not a dumb fck acting on impulse, it can create misunderstandings

Alferian:So see it like this..... There is humanity on one hand which accounts for 30% evil okay? Then there are the Klaxosaurs on the other hand who account for 70% evil okay? So who will he want to destroy? The klaxosaurs? Nah that would kill off the balance as they account for 70% of the evil So why is he killing the klaxosaurs? It's because the Klaxosaurs are organic weapons and not living beings~ as the Klaxosapiens who were inside the klaxosaurs are long dead and are just mutated source of kinda organ for the klaxosaur So yeah they are already dead but their souls are trapped inside the klaxosaur and so after Izayoi weighed the pro's and con's he decided to help humanity Not that he was just impulsive and became his pawn And as for him becoming a pawn, well wait for the next two chapters~ Thank you~
Alferian
AlferianAuthorAlferian

There will be time skip in a few chapters (2-3)~ It's hard to write a child MC~

PlotArmorSama:ohh all right then. will be looking forward to how the story progresses, and please give some subtle hints to the readers that MC is not a dumb fck acting on impulse, it can create misunderstandings
PhectMaphter
PhectMaphterLv5PhectMaphter

The honorific -Sama is for someone higher than you, someone you respect - something like Lord, lady, or hime-sama - princess, but you're addressing her with clear respect. So yeah, for beings so low below him they're literally bugs, there is no way any honorific is correct. Maybe if you're wimpy polite -san might be usable, but he's the that should be addressed with -sama. Moreover, -San is the highest honorific you could address a beggar/homeless with. Especially since this is hierarchy (social). So you were wrong, as honorifics aren't as tied to seniority (as you mentioned older ppl) as to hierarchy, and you'd usually use the San honorific to an older person, and use polite language (which doesn't really translate to English). To summarize - yes, if they're lower than him in the hierarchy, he either uses no honorifics, or -San, which for a being of the status you're trying to make him, would be a sign of benevolence and graciousness. Read up on those please, cause you're plain wrong

Alferian:My dear reader... Seriously dude? You won't add honorifics to his name just because he is lower than him in the hierarchy Well, if it was me, even if it was a beggar, I would still address him with proper honorifics if he was elder than me~ Not complaining though about your review~ And thanks for the review anyway^^
Alferian
AlferianAuthorAlferian

....He may be the origin, but then what? If PAPA wishes the whole world will be against him, sure he can destroy them but then what? Go to another planet and repeat the same cycle? In this chapter, this is when he has no authority so Yes he has address PAPA with dono and not san as it will cause friction against the PAPA faction, but yes in the later chapter when he grows up, he would not add dono or he may? Don't know?>.<

PhectMaphter:The honorific -Sama is for someone higher than you, someone you respect - something like Lord, lady, or hime-sama - princess, but you're addressing her with clear respect. So yeah, for beings so low below him they're literally bugs, there is no way any honorific is correct. Maybe if you're wimpy polite -san might be usable, but he's the that should be addressed with -sama. Moreover, -San is the highest honorific you could address a beggar/homeless with. Especially since this is hierarchy (social). So you were wrong, as honorifics aren't as tied to seniority (as you mentioned older ppl) as to hierarchy, and you'd usually use the San honorific to an older person, and use polite language (which doesn't really translate to English). To summarize - yes, if they're lower than him in the hierarchy, he either uses no honorifics, or -San, which for a being of the status you're trying to make him, would be a sign of benevolence and graciousness. Read up on those please, cause you're plain wrong
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

I feel like you should explain such vital thought process in the book if you haven't, it explains mc's personality better and shows us his way of thinking and his perception

Alferian:So see it like this..... There is humanity on one hand which accounts for 30% evil okay? Then there are the Klaxosaurs on the other hand who account for 70% evil okay? So who will he want to destroy? The klaxosaurs? Nah that would kill off the balance as they account for 70% of the evil So why is he killing the klaxosaurs? It's because the Klaxosaurs are organic weapons and not living beings~ as the Klaxosapiens who were inside the klaxosaurs are long dead and are just mutated source of kinda organ for the klaxosaur So yeah they are already dead but their souls are trapped inside the klaxosaur and so after Izayoi weighed the pro's and con's he decided to help humanity Not that he was just impulsive and became his pawn And as for him becoming a pawn, well wait for the next two chapters~ Thank you~
Inferno_Vor
Inferno_VorLv13Inferno_Vor

If they are his bosses -sama is fine, if they are just acquaintances or friends -san is fine or saying sama will make him seem like he is subservient or has no backbone

Alferian:....He may be the origin, but then what? If PAPA wishes the whole world will be against him, sure he can destroy them but then what? Go to another planet and repeat the same cycle? In this chapter, this is when he has no authority so Yes he has address PAPA with dono and not san as it will cause friction against the PAPA faction, but yes in the later chapter when he grows up, he would not add dono or he may? Don't know?>.<