Review Detail of Primal_Warrior in I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE

The Novel has good potential but it needs a editor badly. 90% Of the sentences need to be reworked. It feels like im reading a bad translation . It also needs to improve the explanation of his system. It keeps getting a new power like an after thought. It would be nice to also have a decription as to how his system works better. Since it seems me and a few others need more details. Such as how does his system help with his studies? How does it help with his spells? Stuff like that. Good potential but needs to be reworked and touched up a bit more.