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This story could’ve been a bit better if the author just did the smallest amount of research. I am already on chapter 4 and I see two mistakes the author would not of made if he was prepared. I might not even read further because I feel there are more to come. I hope someone found this info helpful.
Fairy Tail - A Courageous Journey
McNiels
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I have to be straight with you, it’s not at all helpfull. I would like if you could point out the mistakes properly and give a link to a source if its about the geographical part of the story. Then as the author of this story I’m sad to hear you don’t like it, but I think it get’s better if you continue on. BTW I do plenty of research, its just that I really don’t have time to rewatch/reread Fairy Tail again. But all in all, thank you for your input and I will make sure to improve.
I’ll do aome research of my own and hopefully they will help with future chapters. And as for your question to my paragraph comment here is what i found: the dragnof kingdom was one of if not the most powerful kingdom of that time. It would make sense that there would not be too many human kingdoms as you know they were dragon snacks. What athck out to me the most was that there was a ceetain mountain range which Irene could be seen talking about apparently and that it was part of the long gone Dragnof kingdom. I fee that it would not make sense for two contries to share a mountain range. Not just that it also didn’t really make sense that they would be so close to each other. Here is also something i remember from the anime. Correct me if i am wrong. All if not moat of the dragons were capable of dlight right? but when Ifneel was raising natsu it also seemed like a mountain. There is a pretty high chance that the mountain range was home lots of dragons. There is also a high chance that humans outside the Dragnof kingdom would not take their chances to live so close to dragos as they were fearful and interesting of them. If the Fiore Kingdom was there at that rime there is a chance that it was not a “kingdom” at that time. It could’ve even been a small town/village. After the extinction pf the dragons (the natural ones) there is an even higher chance that the Fiore kingdom expended. I’ll send the links that that used. Which may be helpful/useful to you and the story.
McNiels:I have to be straight with you, it’s not at all helpfull. I would like if you could point out the mistakes properly and give a link to a source if its about the geographical part of the story. Then as the author of this story I’m sad to hear you don’t like it, but I think it get’s better if you continue on. BTW I do plenty of research, its just that I really don’t have time to rewatch/reread Fairy Tail again. But all in all, thank you for your input and I will make sure to improve.
I do get what you are saying about Irene recognizing a mountain range, but the rest are just speculation in my mind. Though I do thank you for your words and I will take it upon me to improve.
UndeadProgenitor:I’ll do aome research of my own and hopefully they will help with future chapters. And as for your question to my paragraph comment here is what i found: the dragnof kingdom was one of if not the most powerful kingdom of that time. It would make sense that there would not be too many human kingdoms as you know they were dragon snacks. What athck out to me the most was that there was a ceetain mountain range which Irene could be seen talking about apparently and that it was part of the long gone Dragnof kingdom. I fee that it would not make sense for two contries to share a mountain range. Not just that it also didn’t really make sense that they would be so close to each other. Here is also something i remember from the anime. Correct me if i am wrong. All if not moat of the dragons were capable of dlight right? but when Ifneel was raising natsu it also seemed like a mountain. There is a pretty high chance that the mountain range was home lots of dragons. There is also a high chance that humans outside the Dragnof kingdom would not take their chances to live so close to dragos as they were fearful and interesting of them. If the Fiore Kingdom was there at that rime there is a chance that it was not a “kingdom” at that time. It could’ve even been a small town/village. After the extinction pf the dragons (the natural ones) there is an even higher chance that the Fiore kingdom expended. I’ll send the links that that used. Which may be helpful/useful to you and the story.