Review Detail of _crazy4MILFS_ in The Epic of Leviathan
Review detail
the story is somewhat good...now i am in chapter 40 and i seriously hoped for the way of writing to improve.. but it didn't..the story is full of big monologues with little to zero interactions as if telling the summary of a story..it's because of these stories where there is no good using of mc's pov with his monologues full of his rantings, i mostly search for stories with 3rd person pov, cause i find tht far better... i hope the author somehow realises this and try to improveđ..but we'll the story will be seriously good if this is improved with a lot interactions not only with mc and his family and gf but also with others.
The Epic of Leviathan
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since you already that far, tell me, is this going to be "gonna catch 'em all"-type harem? a 'huge' harem?
EverythingRelevant:Yah i have noticed this problem too. Im expecting it to improve after maybe chapter 100-150. Around that range is what i would consider an author becoming more experienced with the way writing works
No idea i dropped like 10 chapters after writing that cause grammer was kinda making me mad. And yes the harem is kinda like a catchem all thing
aftermath:since you already that far, tell me, is this going to be "gonna catch 'em all"-type harem? a 'huge' harem?
EverythingRelevant:No idea i dropped like 10 chapters after writing that cause grammer was kinda making me mad. And yes the harem is kinda like a catchem all thing