Review Detail of Spirits_everywhere in Op Girl with Touhou System
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Pros: 1) It's a good work to read. Both grammar and sentence structures are nice, smooth, and easy to read. 2) The characters are not one-dimensional. They have actual feelings and not just some random robots. 3) The mc is a female who cannot express her emotions, though she can feel them. Interesting concept, and good execution of it as well. Could be improve, but is readable. 4) The plot of the story is also slow. I like a good, nice, slow story, so I would rate this as a pro. For those of you who likes fast paced story, this would probably be a con. 5) The mc is not some emo girl with some trauma. She is a bright, cheery girl that can't express her emotions well, though her inner monologue with her systems are fun to read. Cons: 1) The rate of update is slow. Fkin slow. 2) I still don't know what her quirk is since I'm confused by the appearance of the system. So author, if you read your reviews, please do tell me what her quirk is. 3) Not really a fan of system, but it's good. Though I would rate this as a con because I have no idea what the purpose of this system is. 4) The name is...weird. 'Mai Waifu' is her name but you do you, author.
Op Girl with Touhou System
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Thanks for the awesome review, good sir... My comment on the cons: 1. Yup, the update is kinda slow. It's because right now, I'm a third-grade high school student. There are practical exams and tryouts for me to do. 2. Unfortunately, the mc didn't get any quirk because she has an additional joint on her small toe. 3. Yep, the system kind of just there to power up the MC, but I'm trying to think of something to improve its role. 4. My naming sense is too random. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
well Author-san I think this is the first Fanfic that I really like and no con's see in the story or anything and I hope you will not drop this.! and Author-san the system can become her wife maybe in the future (but pls no harem or male romance?) and one question Yuri romance later or Yuri Romance later (PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE) !?
PlebLord:Thanks for the awesome review, good sir... My comment on the cons: 1. Yup, the update is kinda slow. It's because right now, I'm a third-grade high school student. There are practical exams and tryouts for me to do. 2. Unfortunately, the mc didn't get any quirk because she has an additional joint on her small toe. 3. Yep, the system kind of just there to power up the MC, but I'm trying to think of something to improve its role. 4. My naming sense is too random. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Ai_ENMA:well Author-san I think this is the first Fanfic that I really like and no con's see in the story or anything and I hope you will not drop this.! and Author-san the system can become her wife maybe in the future (but pls no harem or male romance?) and one question Yuri romance later or Yuri Romance later (PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE) !?image
Ai_ENMA:well Author-san I think this is the first Fanfic that I really like and no con's see in the story or anything and I hope you will not drop this.! and Author-san the system can become her wife maybe in the future (but pls no harem or male romance?) and one question Yuri romance later or Yuri Romance later (PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEEE) !?image
Ur 8 months late, so when you try to read 1 chapter with irregular updates amongst other fanfics, you will quickly lose track of stuff. The system is…idk, honestly. She has emotion manipulation (if I remember correctly) from her first draw, which basically made her OP already. So my meaning is, does she need anything else?
Miyoko:? She literally said shes quirkless. And the system is there for gacha, its in the title and its being repeated several times already. Gacha gacha gacha
She was born with emotion manipulation but due to now drawing from system the ‘drawback’ was she can’t display emotions tho she can feel, She didn’t get a 5-star upon 2nd draw where she got unconcious manipulation?
Spirits_everywhere:Ur 8 months late, so when you try to read 1 chapter with irregular updates amongst other fanfics, you will quickly lose track of stuff. The system is…idk, honestly. She has emotion manipulation (if I remember correctly) from her first draw, which basically made her OP already. So my meaning is, does she need anything else?