Review Detail of amaturewriter in Konoha's White Wolf
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Heads up. as for reading 6 chps, the main purpose of this ff should be [copy paste from synopsis ] ' So basically, MC reincarnates as a civilian in naruto world to find himself and strive to be strongest without any op cliche wishes. ' --- so one would expect an MC to start with nothing, and climb to the top, unfortunately what u instead have is an MC with super talent and massive chakra [ copy paste c2 ] * He also observes that he has good enough amount of chakra for a civilian (again GOD's grace he gave him high level chakra rivalling to Uzumaki) * or *I have successfully reincarnated in Naruto world with God's grace with high comprehensive talent and healthy body, so why not take advantage to train till exhaustion.* the main purpose of this ff is lost right from start. other than that, u;ve got the usual thing with MC being in konoha, meeting konoha 11, etc.
Konoha's White Wolf
Crimsoneyes
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the fact that u lost ur main thing with 2 chps, i am out. i read further cause it was there and I liked the idea but its kinda cringe and cliche. GL with ur writing
Crimsoneyes:I'll edit the chapters! as fk happy?
Your responses come off as mocking. If that's your take on actual criticism and not someone hating on your story for no reason, but instead they were offering tools to fix the perception of your story people will have when they start, then you are way too immature to be an author and quite frankly should stop writing and go live life for a couple of years until you aren't acting like a child
Crimsoneyes:I'll edit the chapters! as fk happy?
well buddy as you said I am an ******* writer so I did take the criticism very hard and I am really sorry for that, also I have edited the previous chapters and tried to stick with my previos terms in my own way, do try to read if like it and regarding my childish acts well I tried to write first time and I thought they mocked my effort so, again sorry for my rude gestures hope we start fresh new chapters that you may find good (who knows), thanks again for making me realize.
FrightKnight88:Your responses come off as mocking. If that's your take on actual criticism and not someone hating on your story for no reason, but instead they were offering tools to fix the perception of your story people will have when they start, then you are way too immature to be an author and quite frankly should stop writing and go live life for a couple of years until you aren't acting like a child
Thanks buddy! and sorry for sassy sarcasm.. that was uncalled for. I have edited previous chapters hope to your liking and tried to stick with my previous terms so give it a go if want otherwise thanks for reading
amaturewriter:the fact that u lost ur main thing with 2 chps, i am out. i read further cause it was there and I liked the idea but its kinda cringe and cliche. GL with ur writing
Crimsoneyes:Thanks buddy! and sorry for sassy sarcasm.. that was uncalled for. I have edited previous chapters hope to your liking and tried to stick with my previous terms so give it a go if want otherwise thanks for reading