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Toriatim
ToriatimAuthor3yrToriatim

Hi guys, this is the author of this book and I'm shamelessly reviewing on my own story... Hehehe. Hopefully this review might answer your questions. First, the FMC is an independent and strong woman. She will not depend on the MMC for anything, but will still need his support. Second, The FMC just wants to live a happy and simple life and didn't depend on her parents wealth. Third, The MMC is a person who cares so much about the FMC and won't hesitate to go to any length to protect his woman. Fourth, You might find the FMC annoying, but you will later love her. Fifth, No rape. No cheating. No evil mother or mother in law. In this novel, you will find a funny and stubborn FMC and a shameless, cute MMC. Sixth, I'm not a professional writer, so there will be a LOT of grammar mistakes... Hahaha. Sixth, The FMC quite has a temper, so please bare with her and if you can't, don't read the novel. If you don't like the novel, you can move to another novel. Sixth, if you like this novel, I'm shamelessly asking you to leave a review, a comment and send some power stones. This would so much help the author and the book (~_^) Much love Toriatim^_^

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Mr. CEO sweet lover: Little bundle of joy

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Toriatim
ToriatimAuthorToriatim

sorry, I didn't write my books anywhere except from Webnovel

Stephen_Michael_8957:why didn't you complete it in Novel up
Donna_Woods_1152
Donna_Woods_1152Lv11Donna_Woods_1152

It's a good book need more chapters

Dream_Life8
Dream_Life8Lv4Dream_Life8

I like the plot but I wanna know how many chapters?๐Ÿ˜…

Toriatim
ToriatimAuthorToriatim

300+ chapters

Dream_Life8:I like the plot but I wanna know how many chapters?๐Ÿ˜…
Renata_Rezende
Renata_RezendeLv15Renata_Rezende

Wasn't the scene in chapter 11 r*pe? It clearly appears to be.

James_Ekemini
James_EkeminiLv1James_Ekemini

This novel is trash,how can someone kidnap a girl from her marriage and she falls in love with him.Are you dumb or is this the way you actually think,a girl getting married to her true love and is suddenly kidnapped by a strange man who she accidentally slept with and she lived happily ever after๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•.If this happened to you, will you be able to live happily.oh my God I think those stories of wicked stepmothers and sisters are actually better than this trash of a book ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 

Toriatim
ToriatimAuthorToriatim

Thanks for your lovely comment, and I already said it once that if you don't like my novel, move to another one. I simply don't understand why you have to write this horrible comment. I'm an author and I also read a lot of novels on this platform, so I'm not forcing you to read mine

James_Ekemini:This novel is trash,how can someone kidnap a girl from her marriage and she falls in love with him.Are you dumb or is this the way you actually think,a girl getting married to her true love and is suddenly kidnapped by a strange man who she accidentally slept with and she lived happily ever after๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•.If this happened to you, will you be able to live happily.oh my God I think those stories of wicked stepmothers and sisters are actually better than this trash of a book ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
James_Ekemini
James_EkeminiLv1James_Ekemini

I just had to comment because the novel is no offense weird and beside other authors don't complain when I comment on their novel.๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง

Toriatim:Thanks for your lovely comment, and I already said it once that if you don't like my novel, move to another one. I simply don't understand why you have to write this horrible comment. I'm an author and I also read a lot of novels on this platform, so I'm not forcing you to read mine
azunaima
azunaimaLv1azunaima

Shut up you harsh critique! I bet you that at the middle of the novel it will be interesting. By the way this book is a FANTASY novel not real life situation thank you very much!๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 

James_Ekemini:This novel is trash,how can someone kidnap a girl from her marriage and she falls in love with him.Are you dumb or is this the way you actually think,a girl getting married to her true love and is suddenly kidnapped by a strange man who she accidentally slept with and she lived happily ever after๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•.If this happened to you, will you be able to live happily.oh my God I think those stories of wicked stepmothers and sisters are actually better than this trash of a book ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
azunaima
azunaimaLv1azunaima

Why don't you go and write your own novel then you'll know how difficult it is to think of ideas and and cut short some important things in your life so that your fans will be happy and enthusiastic. Oh wait I got it! You are NOT an author!๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜  She wanted constructive criticism and feedback on her book and not PERSONAL INSULTS!๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 

James_Ekemini:This novel is trash,how can someone kidnap a girl from her marriage and she falls in love with him.Are you dumb or is this the way you actually think,a girl getting married to her true love and is suddenly kidnapped by a strange man who she accidentally slept with and she lived happily ever after๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•.If this happened to you, will you be able to live happily.oh my God I think those stories of wicked stepmothers and sisters are actually better than this trash of a book ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
azunaima
azunaimaLv1azunaima

That's bogus! Honestly speaking if I were the one who received this message I'd sue you! Just because other authors didn't comment back on your review of their books doesn't mean she has no right to respond to your personal attacks๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜  I mean come on! I read your review five good times and it clearly looked like you are insulting her not her BOOK. I swear that in the future when you publish your book, I'll personally insult so harsh that you will have to report me to the Webb novel site๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

James_Ekemini:I just had to comment because the novel is no offense weird and beside other authors don't complain when I comment on their novel.๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿคจ๐Ÿง๐Ÿง
Mirriam_Nanjala
Mirriam_NanjalaLv1Mirriam_Nanjala

I can not read with out having coins it's fustrating

Toriatim
ToriatimAuthorToriatim

Hi, is it that you can't read it with coins or fast pass?

Mirriam_Nanjala:I can not read with out having coins it's fustrating
Stephen_Michael_8957
Stephen_Michael_8957Lv1Stephen_Michael_8957

why didn't you complete it in Novel up