Review Detail of ARandomDream in The King of Time - DXD

Okay okay, before you read this, some of the shit in this story were borrowed from another Fanfic called "King of Blades" though sadly it was dropped and so I decided to put my Ideas into the story, making it called King of Time since my OC MC travels around with Time power and shit.. I'm a shitty fanfic writer so don't get your hopes high for this, though I think this fanfic is above average. I'm not going to be that shameless to ask for Stones since this shit was inspired from another FF.