TLDR: Good book. Read it. So far, this book is really good. The writing quality is pretty good, there are no major problems that I've noticed with it. The story development is also going well, there seems to be some sort of plot. The MCs motivation is the classic be free and unfettered or whatever. Pretty standard, but I like it. The character design is also nice, there seems to be good character development on the MC, would be nice to see some more character development on the other characters too, though. Something like Ji Song, who has suffered too much from the schemes of the MC, has a sort of change of heart and becomes more scheming and makes the MC suffer a blow or something. (this is just something I. thought of, but any sort of development on the part of allies and enemies is interesting. What wrote is just an example). Author also updates a lot, which is nice. Finally, the world background is good as well. Seems like author has thought it out quite a bit. Overall, I'd recommend reading it. Also, one last thing, I think it would be interesting to see some sort of plot where MC's sect suffers an attack of some sort, a close relative dies, and mc wants to get revenge. Some sort of additional character motivation for MC. Doesn't have to be what I wrote here.
LazySageDao
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LIKEYah but I still dig it. Better than no motivation, lol. I don't really care much about how he gets motivation, I just care that he has motivation tbh.
User_0000:agree. but revenge plots is just so cliche and cringe and overwritten
LazySageDao:Thanks for this review as you gave me some inspiration for some of the latter plots of the story and character development for some people.
User_0000:agree. but revenge plots is just so cliche and cringe and overwritten
LazySageDao:Thanks for this review as you gave me some inspiration for some of the latter plots of the story and character development for some people.