Review Detail of 50ShadesOfAss in Purpose of Life
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The mc is sooo boring. Literally nothing interesting about him at all and hes very lame. At times hes annoyingly dense that it gets irrating fast. The story is structured in first person and since the mc has like no redeeming quality and is some lazy boring person, it isnt so good. (In my opinion) Yeah yeah character development and all that Shit could happen, but theres the issue with the mcs thoughts and how the author’s writing just isnt so good. Everything feels so jumbled up and out of place. The chapters arent so long so most of the time the content inside is just unnecessary thoughts of mc that dont matter at all. One moment this happens then the next that. Its like one big summary. At times its kinda confusing and made me lose interest so fast. I dont mean to sound rude but theres just nothing compelling about the story that will convince readers to read on. Maybe someone will find this interesting, but i dont. The character interactions are just cringe in my opinion. And i think its because of the authors writing, not because the story is in first person. It feels so unnatural. He talked to some girl and seconds into the conversation she faints like hinata from Naruto. The execution with that scene was just horrible and the anime like substance with that moment made the immersive experience of reading about an mc in a MODERN REAL LIFE World thats not fantasy, seem so non existent.
Purpose of Life
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First let me mark this review because i am sure many of the readers share your view towards this novel. So i thank you for this. Let me break it down for you guys. First complaint is about the Mc being a lazy boring guy, well thats true , thats because thats his character and this novel is a realistic themed, what you expect when we are all lazy and boring people ,spending our time reading novels. But thats what i find interesting to see how a person with whom i share similarities reaches His Goal of having a carefree lazy life in his old agE. Second Complaint this review mentioned is about How the story is all over the place with confusinG and unnecessary thoughts of our Mc . but thats how our Life is , isn’t it? We all fell lost and mainly in our thoughts . So thats another realistic matter which i am trying to convey through this novel which i am glad to achieve. Third complain which i dont quite agree of is thE chapter being too short . I mean really, the average chapter word count is over thousand excluding the prologue . But if you find it short , i cant help it buT the chapter will always be 1000-1300 words long. Lastly , the conversation are cringe and girls fainting doesnt sit well with realistic themed novel , So first , the conversation are cringe but i guess thats how every conversation feels in reAlity and secondly ,i fell very sorry for this reviewer if you are not capable of making Girls faint and dont assmue that just because you are not capable , others are the same. It happenS often in celebrity - fans meeting . Anyways, My condolences for this innocent soul. I am very grateful for this review and fell very sad that you are dropping my work. Mat Fate reunite you with My works again.