Review Detail of J_TsWorld in Hitman with a Badass System

great novel, at first I didn't like it because of the grammer issues and how chaotic the whole start was but I came back and gave it another chance, which to say the least, I wasn't disappointed, although the pacing is still fast from time to time. The core and essence of the story is nice and you know how to keep reader's attention while setting up future plot points well. The only thing I can sincerely advice you on after 300+ chaps of reading is pretense. Its just you switch pretenses a quite often, You seem to be good at writing past tense and I sincerely hope you stick with it as it makes your story flow better.