Review Detail of Niflheim53 in Kingmaker's Revenge

Brilliant. From the premise to the development of the plot, characters, and overall setting, this story is truly captivating. The cast of characters is well thought-out, each having depth, personality, and their own unique traits. The only thing I would criticize is how the passage of time is unclear, but since the story revolves around events rather than time, I feel like the style that it is written is well-suited for the plot. Thank you for this wonderful read, and I look forward to future developments!