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It really had a good start but as chapter 100 onwards, it started to stagnate pretty badly. It's a good book from XMH as I have read books of her before and liked it, but this one's about a new premise and I might not be a fond of divorcee men, I still gave this a chance and I quite like how the story goes. I was quite shocked by the fast romance track and was secretly delighted that even a lot of wasted opportunities were not met during the initial part of the romance, I was still silently delighted and expected that the author made it fast as she got more things and plots to write about. And how disappointed I am when during chapter 100 onwards, most of the chapters are filler or chapters about the side characters. Author, are you expecting that we will be happy wasting our money on chapters that have little to no importance to the story. Like that two chapters about Hyson in his dorm just talking cheekily with his band mates, that chapter was unnecessary. One, the story of the main leads aren't even ripe yet, we still need more of them so putting a side character chapter really lowers your credibility as a writer in my books. Side characters chapters should only happen if they have relevance to the plot, but if it only talks about their boring life then that was just plain maney grabbing. Just adding more chapters so the authors can earn more money. Are you that uninspired? I think there are still a lot of things to talk about the main plot but I feel the story was regressing. I feel like it's too early yet to delve into the side characters life. The worst part was their chapters were very boring and not interesting, just snippets about their life and so many lengthy conversations that were just gushing about feelings and lessons in life. At least give them a plot, not just making them a buffer that makes the whole story boring.There are chapters about different side characters that are really not interesting so please get a grip author.I also like to emphasize how sometimes it is too cheesy. Like there are so many words said to the point that its giving me goosebumps especially with Hyson, he can be very or so very gushing sometimes that I felt that the author was just making him like this because she wanted to add word count to the story. Which is very counter productive. I was thinking how this simple plot can reach thousands of chapters and I thought there will be archs in the story but i am now worry if most of these chapters were just chapters that were there for the word count. I also advise the author to slow down on giving life lessons to the ML, I felt like one or two is enough but if most of the things MC says is conveniently adequate for the past of the ML, it's becoming unnatural and unneeded. Sometimes you need actions more than words to move on. Words can only do more but without actions it will just stay as words. Please minimize it, especially if the MC who was telling this was not the best emotional coach. Or at least if her character likes to talk about life lessons, don't just sprout things that the ML needs but also about random life lessons, there are also readers who are reading the story and could appreciate the lessons. So far the story was good and I really like the slice of life vibes I get from it but the random cuts about the side characters were not really relevant this early in the story. Let us be more full and satisfied with the main story first before you embark on other boats.

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I'm in chapter 200 , and it did get better around 150s? with some new plots but it stagnated again. I sometimes find them overreacting and out of character. For a hundred chapters, there is so little development with the main leads. Like they just met at a business meeting and the MC got her period. There are so many filler chapters.