well, everything is good, the writing is decent, though with several typos, the intro was also good, though my only issue is Enkidu's character, did he absorb the reincarnated or he's still just on sleep mode? cause it will make the story bland and boring if he just acts as a slave and just follows any orders his master gives him, and for your ff to just follow the cannon. I had expectation that the reincarnated will awaken and assimilate with Enkidu and leave abe, but the possibility is seemingly bleak. hope you consider those things cause a good ff with Enkidu as the MC is scarse, and this ff even has potential. though I have to be honest the part where he met abe was a major turn off.
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