Review Detail of Heart59 in When the Sky Falls too Deep

I actually suggest that you don’t put an adjective before a dialogue tag. An example is “she said angrily.” There’s actually nothing wrong with that, but Instead of putting angrily, you can put She clenched her fist. “Dialogue.” Like Show the actions. It’s just my opinion hehe! Your book’s great! Also, if you have time, kindly check out my new book too!

That would help a lot. Thank youu @Heart59💛