Review Detail of Miya_Tango in A SONG OF WRATH

The synopsis is written well. You expect to read a reall masterpiece, but... Boom! Not a genre I would normally read. Objectively speaking, the story line is interesting, but there is something missing. I wonder myself what is it? Some kind of lack the lightness? There are places that I feel the text is a bit artificial, even kinda plastic. So definietly there is a place to improve.