Review Detail of Tas_kp020403 in A SONG OF WRATH

This story is amazing in a word. Writer made a steady development of the story which is too much appreciating. Characters are cool as well as background. Despite a few grammatical problems, the narrative style was quite good. I request the write to elaborate a little as it contains magics and not a technological background that we understand too quickly. And please, writer, update as soon as possible. The story starts to be too temptating as the leads are going to meet again.[img=update][img=update]