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Review Detail of Venne_18 in The Ancients World

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Venne_18
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The story is nice and all except for the fact that there is too much sexual development when I was really anticipating for the next quest and revenge and all especially 200+ chapters. The beginning of the story has so much to correct but as author is not a veteran at this I did not bother much about it. Its just the development between ml and fl is too much and its kinda awkward reading it especially when I am near my parents reading.(lol rrally I support the romance cause its justified but its really just too much like every 3-5 chapters another sex chapter comes in)

The Ancients World

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Also mc’s character development really went downhill. Kinda selfish when it comes to the church too, I mean i kinda pity the saintess but thats that. He’s also kinda arrogant and too full of himself just because he has the strongest class :(