Overall, a good story. I like the world building, it really adds to the other world theme and shows how different everything is. It is interesting how the author adds both magical and modern earth technology into the world. I also like how the MC isn't perfect and has her shortcomings, and that is a lot. Only complaint is that sometimes the grammar and spelling is bad, so if they go back and edit that would be nice.
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