Okay... I read only 10 chapters, but I am not interested to continue So I just give you a summary what you get in to. Guy going on adventure, trying to solve everyone problems - because that's important. And make a lot of friends and being most friendly. All of this in fast pace, in r-15 like Japanese style - if you know what am I talking about than congratulations, if you don't....shounen, yeah that's enough. It's written nicely. Harem? Eh...well it's here. Don't expect anything graphic or even echi, but hey. Feelings and romance, right bro?...ooof. MC got more powers and learns a lot of stuff. That's it. You kinda could see why I am not going to continue.... Conclusion. It's certainly a good first attempt at fanfics. I just don't find it's interesting and I don't think something going to change in hp...another hp? Are you serious... How many fanfics is there already? Stop it. Get some help. P. S. Either way, you couldn't possibly write something worse than rolling doing nowadays....
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