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Inferno_Vor
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[As of chap 11] Writing and update stability are good. Story progresses at a nice pace and is easy to follow. The only thing I don't like is that MC is an Exo. It'd be fine if this was a rando action-adventure story with him just visiting worlds, meeting people and fighting, but it's weird when you add romance and harem not to mention the fact that he doesn't say what he is while looking completely human. Author might've made changes in the later parts of the story mitigating or removing the negatives of him being an exo, but I doubt it.

Just Another Multiverse FanFiction

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Electrum_Eli
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Yeah Mc do not have Dick, As of chapter 25 and he had Weiss as girlfriend

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

You mean he is literally r-15 harem mc? They too never use dicks but that's one doesn't even have one? Damn...

Electrum_Eli:Yeah Mc do not have Dick, As of chapter 25 and he had Weiss as girlfriend
Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5Yuri_is_Ntr

Either way, that's sounds unpleasant....

Electrum_Eli
Electrum_EliLv4Electrum_Eli

Yeah I think

Yuri_is_Ntr:You mean he is literally r-15 harem mc? They too never use dicks but that's one doesn't even have one? Damn...