Review Detail of Blaxk77 in Military System god realm revolution

An editing would be appreciated, I can’t understand how you can post a story with so many grammar faults. Even I who is from a country where English is difficult to learn wouldn’t make that many mistakes. The story is good, the world background excellent, the characters could be better written but still acceptable, the story is finished so no need to wait for update. Other than grammar, the story is a gem that would probably have a deep success if it was readable.