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I'm never one to write negative reviews, but this story is asking, I don't recommend reading this story, it's at the level of a crackfic, the reincarnated MC acting like a child and thinking like one, going through the same suffering as Naruto but still treating Hiruzen like one a grandfather, if it were to manipulate I wouldn't say anything but it isn't, in the last chapter released, 22nd the author even writes a note saying that they are children, the guy was reincarnated and has memories so how can he be a child? I think people got dumber reading this story, if it weren't for these MC inconsistencies the story would be reasonably good, maybe above average depending on future development but as it is it's not worth the time it was written.
Reincarnated as Naruto's Twin Brother
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I think anybody who actually look at this person review should attempt the story on their own. The author has never once mentioned how old or the past life of the Mc. We don’t know if the Mc was a child in his past life or a old man so to assume great emotional intelligence or the ability to apply their intelligence is a ridiculous reasoning. The Mc could’ve literally been a child who grew up in a hospital who never experienced life. All I’m saying is that this person and others give crazy criticism for things they don’t have the exact answers to so they assume the worse.
"A boy reincarnated as Naruto's twin brother. Let's see if he becomes a great shinobi or something more then a shinobi." bro the description literally says that MC was a boy when he reincarnated so a child acting like a child is not surprising. The real question is how does he act after he becomes a bit older? Is he still naïve? immature? Simp? Hero complex? those are the questions we need answer to.
If that is the case, then just remove his status as a reincanatee. There is literally no point if it's not even relevant.
Rk6T:"A boy reincarnated as Naruto's twin brother. Let's see if he becomes a great shinobi or something more then a shinobi." bro the description literally says that MC was a boy when he reincarnated so a child acting like a child is not surprising. The real question is how does he act after he becomes a bit older? Is he still naïve? immature? Simp? Hero complex? those are the questions we need answer to.