Review Detail of ILoveChaos in One Piece and the Smile Slime Pirate [Rework]

Item: One Piece and the Smile Slime Pirate [Rework]
Rating: 4

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ILoveChaosLv32yrILoveChaos

Sigh the story seems intersting and all but how am i supposed to rewd if i have to think what every sentance means before continuing, it irritating but since its still readable i shall give a 4 ;)

One Piece and the Smile Slime Pirate [Rework]

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RedReactAuthorRedReact

I don't know if that 'edit' satisfy your eyes tho, but sure, if I remember that is 🤭

ILoveChaos:Thank you very much but can ye just reply to this thread once more when u edit the chapters? I would've helped ye for free but i have school and stuff and busy with my own fic 😅

2yr

RedReactAuthorRedReact

haha pardon for not being a good grammer creator... But I'll do my best and edit them somehow, someday. Just that, I'm busy all this time and is still editing the existing drafts🙏🙏

2yr

ILoveChaosLv3ILoveChaos

Thank you very much but can ye just reply to this thread once more when u edit the chapters? I would've helped ye for free but i have school and stuff and busy with my own fic 😅

RedReact:haha pardon for not being a good grammer creator... But I'll do my best and edit them somehow, someday. Just that, I'm busy all this time and is still editing the existing drafts🙏🙏

2yr

ILoveChaosLv3ILoveChaos

i mean it's not like im expecting perfect english or stuff but atleast enough to not make me stopw hile reading and think what this means

RedReact:I don't know if that 'edit' satisfy your eyes tho, but sure, if I remember that is 🤭

2yr