Review Detail of halfblinde in Scar : It's you

The start of the novel was actually REALLY well done. My only gripe was the extreme exposition dump that came almost immediately after. I felt a little dreadful after that, sure, but I continued to read and really liked the narration and the tone of the book overall. The characters do get a little jumbled up and confused in my head, but I'm never really good at memorizing characters unless they have extremely distinctive features, so take that as you will. I personally enjoyed the worldbuilding, but I also felt that it was a little too similar to make other novels that I have read before. Despite such, I did like what I read so far, and I hope you continue to write this novel.