Review Detail of bigpollo in Secret Santa System

Item: Secret Santa System
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

bigpolloLv143yrbigpollo

There are alot of problems with grammar and punctuation. In the first chapter alone, the use of periods and commas are missed. Is the author a native English speaker? If not i suggest to brush up on capitalization and the usage of nouns and pronouns. Cool idea otherwise and good luck!

Secret Santa System

SivaTheGreat

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SivaTheGreatAuthorSivaTheGreat

Actually, English is not my native and this is actually my first novel. So, the initial chapters may have poor grammer in a few places. Anyways, thanks for your encouragement and I am glad that you at least liked the concept.

3yr

KokushibouLv4Kokushibou

Then i recommend editing them, the beginning is extremely important for people to decide if they wanna read this any longer. (And how they rate this)

SivaTheGreat:Actually, English is not my native and this is actually my first novel. So, the initial chapters may have poor grammer in a few places. Anyways, thanks for your encouragement and I am glad that you at least liked the concept.

3yr

bigpolloLv14bigpollo

Thanks.. I wish you luck and hope to see it get better in the future

SivaTheGreat:Actually, English is not my native and this is actually my first novel. So, the initial chapters may have poor grammer in a few places. Anyways, thanks for your encouragement and I am glad that you at least liked the concept.

3yr

bigpolloLv14bigpollo

This is an option... or you could get a beta to help out...

Kokushibou:Then i recommend editing them, the beginning is extremely important for people to decide if they wanna read this any longer. (And how they rate this)

3yr