Review Detail of stickbUg in Arpious of the Planes

Honestly, I didn't have high expectations after the first half of the first volume as it kinda seemed like an EoC copy and the pacing, grammar, and kingdom building were wack, but after you introduced the planes, I became really invested. I can see why you included that it differs later on from EoC in the description. Writing quality has gotten much better as of the later chapters, story development is getting somewhere after the hints you placed in the second volume, and the world background is probably the most interesting to me. It seems like a cool concept that differs from realms or worlds. But, it's still basically a tower, kind of. Well, I'm just excited for what's to come and hope you don't screw up and I hope you learned from the first volume's mistakes.