I kept reading for a while because it had a few interesting things about it that I liked, but this story is pretty cringe in some parts and anyone that points that out in the comments is mobbed up on by this Authors cringe lord fans. I can tell by reading this story that the Author is young and so are most of the readers, so I am sure that as they get older the author will see why some of this is cringe and write better stories in the future. The author obviously has the talent/skill to write though. I don't even care about the cringe though, just read any Japanese manga or watch Japanese anime and it's a cringe overload. So obviously some people like this stuff, but I had a huge problem with how the fans of this story acted towards any person that had a bit of criticism. I'm not a fan of mobbing on people you don't agree with.
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