I'll ignore the obvious OP wand, uber easy to get house elves, ultra SS rare bloodlines and friendly goblins. Waking up at 3am? I think that's just dumb or simply wrong. I got bored of the focus on boring ass druella and the whole 'save the houses' Just met this girl on the train, skip scene and now she's the new BFF for no good reason. 'I just met this dude so now I'll deal with bulling and blood purist in general 'cause? I talked to him for a bit? ' Dumb. Also tom: I got a shitload of thing to do but I better spend my first day in school waking up at 3am to train this unimportant girl. TLDR> way too many cliches, OP MC turns into an idiot whenever he's around kids
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