Review Detail of Monster_Paradise in Dragon Ball Saga: Conquest -REWRITTEN-

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This is really good! I love the pacing and all. He made the right choice by going to Yardrat soon after to learn all about Ki. 👍👍 Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Dragon Ball Saga: Conquest -REWRITTEN-

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Thanks! Right now the fanfic is totally unedited. Pacing is definitely something I am concerned about. Glad to hear it's not that bad! Lol. I appreciate your review.

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