Please, I think that there needs to be more work on your writing. There are some parts where I think you are writing decently, and other parts that need a lot of work. The concept is cool, although a little cheesy. However, you must put limitations. It would be a bit too op if the character can do anything just by using the camera. Alright, good luck!
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