The fantasy twist in the FL's life is very interesting. Like what the author mentioned, the story started a bit slow but the pace caught up perfectly. My only issue is there's almost no paragraph breaks resulting to huge chunks of text that's personally a bit daunting to read for me. Other than that everything's great.
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LIKECloud_Rasmus:Thank you for your review! I will definitely take it to heart and break things up to better appeal to the reader.