I find this story very endearing! The FL's mind is a cute messđ The pace is good and characters are well made. As for the writing quality, I see the efforts of the author in improving their writing[img=recommend] One thing I could suggest is use Grammarly to assist you in writing. This one will definitely stay in my library!~
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LIKEWilliane_M_P:Thank you very much for the review. I will do my best to adjust my grammar.image