Review Detail of EldritchAuthor in Universal Traveller

Fresh take on the fairly overdone Litrpg genre. Writing quality is overall rather good, though some issues with past/present tenses, and some spelling mistakes are present, they do become less frequent as more chapters come out. Descriptions can be a little info-dumpy, but this also allows the pacing of the rest of the story to be consistent, which is a plus, From what I have read, Story development seems to be going at a reasonable pace. Character design is fine, though the main character seems a little flat, akin to a vast majority of protagonists in the same genre. World background is very typical for the genre, similar to many other stories. This may act as a turn-away for some, but also means that the focus of the reader's attention will be the goings on of the main character, rather than the world itself; This isn't to say there is no uniqueness, just that it resembles other stories a fair amount.