Review Detail of caia_clearwood in The Sin

The author did a great job with the synopsis.U feel the mystery, the tension in this book. This is one of those books that drags you in and makes you read every nail biting moment until you finished it. However, i have a few concerns. Why is the 15th chapter Free and 14th one locked? I felt Dan is more like a teenager with father issues than a grownup man with the way his monologues carry out. I feel for him, i really do. What with him writIng poems and brooding. He is alone and lonely. I get it. But... according to the author he must be in his twenties (i deduced that from lily’s age). And he is way too sensitive for a guy in his twenties. I dont know... If it was a female Instead of a Male lead, I could understand the inner monolgue. Or it was me i guess. i Lean towards more stronger male lead. Or maybe the author is trying to show how Dan grows in His character, especially by showing from where he started. Other than that, the author did a splendid job of creating each scene. skillfully handled world-Building.