Review Detail of Everythinger_Kumar in Dangerously in Love

You have a very very interesting and a progressive plot. When I was reading, there wasn’t this single moment when I felt detached from the plot and didn’t understand anything. The pace is just right and you also numbered your chapters appropriately so that it matches with the web novel’s (something that I look out for). Overall, a good try! You can always try to refine your work and get better at whatever you’re planning to write.