Review Detail of Avarice_of_Greed in Transmigration in Against the Gods (AU)

Yo why u sucking on Yun Che's dong? You made the dragon get a little stronger than canon just to kill it off and give it to Yun Che. By doing so he will be stronger than his canon self cuz he has better quality Dragons meat and blood. Not to mention other plotholes like Mc being able to overpower an EMPEROR PROFOUND BEAST but not human pactitioners at True Profound to Earth Profound. Don't use that 'He poisoned the dragon' crap. Not only that, it seems like Yun Che also got the Pheonix legacy despite your MC going to the trial first! Like how? The mc already completed the trial shouldn't the pheonix trial be useless but then in the tournament it is implied Yun Che also has it?! Jasmine even points it out to Yun Che how Mc's spear has the fragment of the Pheonix they met! Bruv.... Then the romance... Bro okay I don't have anything against your choice but like. Why is the mc being such a pussy? Like why act like a shy dude when she just leans on him? He finds her attractive why not just admit it? He's acting like CHILD not someone who lived TWO LIVES. Well enough ranting... Its not perfect but it's an okay fanfic. Theres hella alot of plotholes but u get over them kinda quickly. I just got pissed at those little things since I like to spot errors and shit. I stopped reading somewhere around him taking the dragons trial. I'll wait till it reaches 90 or 100 chaps before I give it a hivher review. (Most of the time I give high ratings its just that I like me some atg shit.) It u get butthury u can delete this review if u want author-san.