Review Detail of mozza_mello in Ember's Crown

Alright, let's beginnnnn my long-ass review :D First off, lemme say that this is, indeed, a quality book! So good job on that, author! <3 The writing is absolutely impeccable. Even though this is a fantasy genre, but the writing is poetic and the author was able to describe the setting in detail. I could imagine the place and the events pretty clearly in my head! :D I really love that this novel mainly utilizes first-person POV, makes it easier for me to get immersed in their story hehe! The characters also felt real and they're well fleshed-out, I think it was clear that the author put a lot of thinking into them hehe! For the update schedule, I won't complain even though the frequency is pretty low. But to me, I always think that quality is better than quantity so it okei hehe! Although, as far as I know, this site favors books that are frequently updated (maybe daily?), so it would be better if you can update it like, maybe 2-3 times a week? :D Now please keep in mind that my suggestions are all personal opinion, not facts okie :D First, I think some paragraphs could be spaced out more, particularly when there are like 3-4 dialogues in a single paragraph. Some paragraphs containing fight scenes are also very long imo, but I guess it's needed for the flow? So it's up to you hehe! :D Secondly, I like the characters, I really do. But maybe I'd be able to connect even more with them if there are more of "show, not tell" in terms of their backstory. The thing is, you were able to convey their emotions and thoughts so well using first-person POV, but in the first chapter, for example, Amy's backstory was spilled in around 1-2 paragraphs when they gathered around and share their story. It's not bad, honestly, it painted the picture for us readers. But a bit of a glimpse would also be nice? :D Maybe like, when Amy told them about how she hitched rides and stuff to arrive there, it could've been conveyed through dialogues like, Tarik says "ah, I regret coming here," and Amy could reply by saying "dude, I've gone through this and this just to be here. Don't be so gloomy, you got me!" But aye, those are just my personal opinion hehe! Me really like how well-thought the world background and the characters are :D Also, I like your poetic writing style and your plot! :D Great work, authorrr <3