Review Detail of DarkseidEquation in Ember's Crown
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I'm not great at reviewing and it might no be as good as yours but here it is. The world building is off to a good start and I don't expect it to get too detailed right at the first 3 chapters. The language you use for your writing is splendid by using unique vocabulary but not going over the top. Also there isn't too much repetition of the words aswell. The current relationship between Nero and Amy is very well written and off to a great start but I wouldn't go to quick with it and focus with the impact of the other characters. There is an air of mystery in this novel around the towers and also the other characters as well. Good stuff.
Ember's Crown
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Thank you for the review. The struggle i've taken on is that I wanted to go for a 1st person present tense narration so that the novel has a cinematic effect, along with an emphasis on the main character's development. The drawback is that as the characters are the narrators, they can only provide a limited perspective as they only know what they've experienced and what they're experiencing. I'm building an expansive world of cruelty, political intrigue, magic and wonder, but It given the POV it can only unfold as the characters discover it. Thank you for taking the time to read my work, I appreciate the critique and will develop the story accordingly.