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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv43yrMel_Aniv

I really like the story and wants improvements. (') This was used for inner thought or inner voice and use this (") for an actual spoken voice. But overall, I like how you describe and detailed everything. It was the problem I encountered. Good luck and stay safe!

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Ember's Crown

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Hey, thanks for the review. Regarding the single and double inverted commas. In the UK it's conventional to use single inverted commas for speech and double inverted commas for quotes or internal speech. I know that using double inverted commas, or "speech marks" are more popularly used for speech, but as a subject of the crown, I decided to follow the traditionally British approach to written dialog.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Wow I didn't know! Well you know what to do....good luck with your novel! I like your novel so far!

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Wow! I didn't know! Well you know what to do! I like your novel so far and good luck in the future! Best wishes for your success!

Clone_v2:Hey, thanks for the review. Regarding the single and double inverted commas. In the UK it's conventional to use single inverted commas for speech and double inverted commas for quotes or internal speech. I know that using double inverted commas, or "speech marks" are more popularly used for speech, but as a subject of the crown, I decided to follow the traditionally British approach to written dialog.
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Clone_v2AuthorClone_v2

Thank you so much :D

Mel_Aniv:Wow! I didn't know! Well you know what to do! I like your novel so far and good luck in the future! Best wishes for your success!